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You've been on my mind... by `Iscariot-Priest:iconIscariot-Priest:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Romantic > General Romantic Fiction


Quite frankly, you're heavy. Get off.
©2007-2009 `Iscariot-Priest
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Author's Comments

This is so not the thing to tell a girl. :noes:



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A second DD for my six word stories, I'm floored.
Thanks to ~FelixT and ^StJoan for suggesting and featuring this.

If you'd like to voice a complaint, do so here [link] so I don't miss it. Thank you for your cooperation.

Daily Deviation

Given 2007-11-16

Eleven words can tell so much more that they seem to do.You've been on my mind... by *Iscariot-Priest has proven that, and made me laugh. A lot. (Suggested by ~FelixT and Featured by ^StJoan)

Comments


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~TheNeuf Jun 5, 2007, 5:12:00 PM
:lol: Yeah, you can say that again! I wish I had that problem :sniff:
lol, good story :)

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`Iscariot-Priest Jun 5, 2007, 5:17:10 PM
Thanks, but do you mean you want a girl on your mind, though it'd eventually get heavy :noes:

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
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~ninjaweed Jun 5, 2007, 6:03:03 PM
I'm sorry but, I so with somebody would say that to me. it would be hilarious.

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If you're not confused you're not paying attention.
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=living4him Jun 5, 2007, 7:07:00 PM
That is so mean!! XD *laughs*

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Keep staring.
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~MeadowCress Jun 5, 2007, 9:28:48 PM
You're quite good at these 6 word short stories. Though do consider making the title a part of the story a slight bit of cheating, even though the 6 words work fine without the title.

And it would be great if you could just push someone off your mind when they got too heavy.

rolls eyes

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We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to. - W. Somerset Maugham
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~cut-devil4 Jun 6, 2007, 1:07:11 AM
ok, so, tomorrow is wednesday.. I havn't seen a drabble yet!

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*pokes tongue out*
YOU TELL ME
*says she doesn't know anymore*
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`Iscariot-Priest Jun 6, 2007, 6:17:16 AM
Goodness, 3 emoticons? I assume you like it :) :D :XD:

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
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`Iscariot-Priest Jun 6, 2007, 6:26:19 AM
DA was being an ass, I finally got this thing submitted (had to wait 7 hours for the damn system maintainence). *grumbles*

but it's on now :)

--
“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
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`Iscariot-Priest Jun 6, 2007, 6:36:47 AM
My goodness, you've found me out, my six word stories are actually 12 word stories.
Yeah, half the fun is making the title and story work together.

I too wish I could shove people off my mind. :)

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”

-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
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