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For ~moyanII's Haiku Notepad contest. And yes that's my manly writing :noes:

Didn't use most of the haiku written there (they're mostly first drafts). However, if you're curious, the scribbles on the page are:

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sprouting
from a paddy field
a plane

no breakfast
spin class
dry hurl

no dinner
club hopping
wet hurl

cold morn' / after
cold shower / colder shower
hot coffee / colder coffee

summer sun
through rainclouds
gives no warmth

how miserable!
this meal
for one

running
up an escalator
a child

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The rest is haiku theory based on concepts thought by Basho.

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:iconmoyanii:
wow, the concept/theory is so deep. :o

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~secret study~
~silent studio~
:iconiscariot-priest:
Ha ha, it really isn't - just looks like that because it isn't the full picture. I'll post something more comprehensible once I finish learning about it.

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconbogbrush:
That's way too neat! ;)

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Ethics? That's the place north of London init?
:iconiscariot-priest:
:sing: Because it's mine, I walk the line.

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconanavah:
Oh wow! Really shows the process. Good luck on the contest! :heart:

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Thank you.
:iconiscariot-priest:
Thank, it just so happened this page had some theory on it, usually it's a just bunch of first drafts all over the place. =p

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconenkerzed:
whoa, i've never really been a big fan of haiku but dem scribbles be heavy stuff. oh and i actually thought the parts where it's all "no breakfast, spin class, dry hurl" and "no dinner, club hopping, wet hurl" were funny... i can totally imagine it happening.

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Bow ties and propeller hats are my specialty! ~ quothed Billy
:iconiscariot-priest:
Thanks, and yeah no reason why haiku can't be funny, humans are funny people. =p

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconenkerzed:
yeah, totally

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Bow ties and propeller hats are my specialty! ~ quothed Billy

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