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Last minute entry for ~moyanII's Haiku Notepad contest. Written on post it notes on my wallet. Yes, that's a ticket to Transformers 2: Revenge of the Fallen. :noes:

Written mostly over the course of a dinner outside, the scribbles on are:

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kept company
by handphone's glow
alone

after dinner
desert
and small talk

kneeling
by the tokong
- a dog

hand waving
he grabs
a metaphor

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:iconmoyanii:
that's it. i do write haiku scraps on ticket stubs too! :o

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Very nice!!

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Thank you.
:iconiscariot-priest:
Thanks. :)

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconiscariot-priest:
Honestly, even notepads are too inconvenient to lug about. When the moment strikes, it strikes. :nod:

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
:iconmoyanii:
that's why haijin are more spontaneous than painters. hmm.

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~silent studio~
:iconaqua-rat:
A novel way to display the haiku. I like it.

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THIS IS THE GATE OF HEAVEN. ENTER YE ALL BY THIS DOOR. (This door is kept locked because of the draught - please use side door.)
:iconiscariot-priest:
It wasn't really meant to be a place to display haiku, it's just that I had sticky notes and a pen at the moment and I didn't wan t to lose the haiku. Spur of the moment, truly. =p

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine
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It's handy that haiku are short, imagine writting a sestina on a bus ticket? :)

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Ethics? That's the place north of London init?
:iconiscariot-priest:
Almost as difficult as composing a sestina on the fly. :B

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“Now me lay down to sleep.
Mow da zeebas down like sheep.
Give dem to me nice and dead.
Me no happy ‘til me fed.”
-Bedtime prayer of crocs, Pearls Before Swine

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